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Jayarre
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Hey, here's a new beat from me. Please listen it and leave some feedback if possible. Thanks. 
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Think Like Me
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Think Like Me
My SC Page
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Jayarre
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No feed at all?
gullyjewelz
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hey actually this aint bad - i like the instrumentation goin on - i dont think the "main melody" is repetetive enough - but that could easily be my onw personal opinoi, i know a lot of producers DONT like repetetivenes . . .
i say it like this - i think i could spit to it!! thats 4 shizzy
i say it like this - i think i could spit to it!! thats 4 shizzy
gullyjewelz
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oh - n that sad stories joint is hot - but it sounds like . . . an eminem track (but i dont follow dude that closely to say for sure) if its not a replica i could certainly hear em on it!!!
just relax has a good "relaxed" feel to it - i like the drum sounds on it too - cool base line!!! . . again , ur trax are very melodic . . . on some real "hip hop" shit - as opposed to rap music [i think anyhow]
i like legend's road - the title reminds me of THE GAME but the track doesnt - track is kinda . . . spitt-spastic-able - but it may need some more drumz to drop - the hook is real commanding . . song has a "story" feel to it - but i hate to spit stories - i like raw lyrics over "story" beats!!!
dream - radio feel to it - good simple joint - like lil flip would use - i like that too-for dif. reasons - this could really be a nice radio attempt - BUT ADD SOME AIR OR CHORUS EFFECT TO THE HIGH HAT - ITS TOO FLAT
--good job dude - holla at me if u lookin to collaborate!!!
just relax has a good "relaxed" feel to it - i like the drum sounds on it too - cool base line!!! . . again , ur trax are very melodic . . . on some real "hip hop" shit - as opposed to rap music [i think anyhow]
i like legend's road - the title reminds me of THE GAME but the track doesnt - track is kinda . . . spitt-spastic-able - but it may need some more drumz to drop - the hook is real commanding . . song has a "story" feel to it - but i hate to spit stories - i like raw lyrics over "story" beats!!!
dream - radio feel to it - good simple joint - like lil flip would use - i like that too-for dif. reasons - this could really be a nice radio attempt - BUT ADD SOME AIR OR CHORUS EFFECT TO THE HIGH HAT - ITS TOO FLAT
--good job dude - holla at me if u lookin to collaborate!!!
REEK BROCK
MR. LAST WORD
Yeah man .That track sound like the closing credits to a movie.Its real open and leaves room for the MC to handle they business.I like it cus it doesn't over whelm you but its a deep sounding type of beat.
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Jayarre
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Whoa, a whole review gully? Looks good man thanks for the feedback much appreciated.
@ Reek, yea this beat I left kinda empty for the mc to shine opposed to legends road where the beat is really present.
@ Reek, yea this beat I left kinda empty for the mc to shine opposed to legends road where the beat is really present.
vmock
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nice...i like the "laid back" feel to your tracks
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Ruthless
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hollyy shyt yo i swear i heard ur Just Relax beat somewhere in some song iono they prolly bought it off you but yea nice beatss.. i like how u use the keys
Trumpspade
I'M BLESSED.......
gullyjewelz said:
I hope to use that expression soon!
'Cause it has to take a true hiphop head to understand that...........
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Jayarre
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Lol I took it like the track was spittable... I think that is it plus it's harder for me to understand, because I don't come from England or the USA. Most regular words I can understand though.
Ruthless where did you hear it... did you hear somebody do a rap over it? Anyways thx man and vmock too. I just do my thing with the producin tracks, just what I like, with the melodies and all shit, it's really cool to me. The only problem is I ain't got a good pattern for producin the beats and the school I go to is fucked up. First I went to school I was in a group that I thought I would stay in the whole year, but a month later it was all changed. The CEO of the school musta been going crazy. And I think that group thing is ridiculous, but I got a nicer schedule now though. But anyways, that means most of time I don't finish off my beats when I want. Plus sometimes I just have a bad day and my ideas don't work, I think that's because the routine is missin. So when I say I got a new beat in the making, it's possible that I finish it a month later because of those reasons.
But to all producers and rappers on here, keep doing your thing when you're good at it but don't let it get in your way of school (or job). I know it's hard but I find it's better that way.
Peace
Ruthless where did you hear it... did you hear somebody do a rap over it? Anyways thx man and vmock too. I just do my thing with the producin tracks, just what I like, with the melodies and all shit, it's really cool to me. The only problem is I ain't got a good pattern for producin the beats and the school I go to is fucked up. First I went to school I was in a group that I thought I would stay in the whole year, but a month later it was all changed. The CEO of the school musta been going crazy. And I think that group thing is ridiculous, but I got a nicer schedule now though. But anyways, that means most of time I don't finish off my beats when I want. Plus sometimes I just have a bad day and my ideas don't work, I think that's because the routine is missin. So when I say I got a new beat in the making, it's possible that I finish it a month later because of those reasons.
But to all producers and rappers on here, keep doing your thing when you're good at it but don't let it get in your way of school (or job). I know it's hard but I find it's better that way.
Peace