New Beat, check it out and give me feedback

[NickSpringfield]

This is a little catchy thing I was working on today. No samples. It's plain and simple, but I like it. You guys have anything in mind that would liven it up a bit maybe? Give feedback, please.

-Springfield

It's called "Goodbye" (instrumental)

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=1906/singles

 

[NickSpringfield]

Alright, can someone at least tell me it sucks so I know? Seriously, I like the flow of it and I wrote something to it, but I feel the beat needs something else to give it that energy even though it's slow.


Thanks,
-Springfield

 

[Barrage NP]

its way to simple to me. I ain't really feelin it, at all. the drums r kinda repetitive and boring. Being honest, but hey others might dig it. someone else this guy out, feedback need that. peace

 

[LiquidBronze]

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yeah you def. gotta add more background melodies or "noise"
the drums do get a bit repetitive
throw a change up in there somewhere too

keep at it though

peace
LB