Need some feedback on song

[allendale]

Hey guys, I made a song using fruity loops and audacity for the vocals.

This is the first song i've ever produced, and I would love some feedback!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=59Z_miOqHH8

Thanks guys!

 

[Physical Ill]

all i have to say is, MAD PROPS for having the boondocks on DVD, that shit is good.

 

[Cwadroon]

haaaaaaaa! Reminds me of early Fresh Prince! That was real entertaining doggy, but you should be helping Moms " clean de home tonight"! Boys leaving clutter everywhere! jkjk.. That was good.

 

[cybadaz]

i enjoyed it ... it made me smile it was fun ... nuf said , now wheres my Fresh Prince LP ?