Audacious Recording BUT...
Hi
Step one - toss the cheezie horn sample & get something else truly synthetic or layer some cheap non horn sounds to create something.
Step two - as a sketch of ideas it works really well.
Step three - rerecord the bass using some compression & EQ to get the fullness & punch you need for dance. I like what's played but too much of it didn't make it through the recording process. I don't really like compression much but you've lost a lot of the bass.
Step three - You'll have to get a real melody & voice to perform it. The funky bass line & blues informed guitar lines a crying for a voice.
Step four - decide which guitar lines REALLY WORK and which are fill. & by this I mean particularly where you played LOTS of notes but didn't move the piece forward. Ditch the fill & fill up those spaces with a boost up of the re recorded bass line
Step five - keep going. The piece shows real promise.
Cheers
rayC
