Need Lyrics Help....bad!

[soundboy]

I have posted two songs called STRINGERS and DRIVING. I dont have lyrics one to them. I can write some good hooks to the songs but thats is about it. I dont profess to be a songwriter i just make music. if you guys could give them a listen and tell me what you think about them and what direction you would go lyrically that would be great. If nothing else i might be able to acquire a songwritting partner if some one likes my style of music. thanks here is the link the songs again are STRINGERS and DRIVING http://artists2.iuma.com/IUMA/Bands/CreateADisc/

 

[relliker]

Yo!

soundboy,

If you still have no lyrics for stringer I've concocted something for you. Send me your email and I'll send you a wma clip with my horrible singing to your song to get an idea of how I thought it should sound (you'll be getting a free vocal melody line too!).

Here goes:

I can't deceive her,
but I cannot reach her.
I dread the 'morrow,
the feelin' is hollow.

I've been thinking all day long,
that what I'm doing is so wrong.
I'm stretching things, I tend to linger,
Feel like I am an acting stringer...

I feel I'm playing out a role,
with thoughts of guilt down to my soul.
I have to make some sense of things
can't wait to see what tomorrow brings.


Deep down I know it,
I'm gonna blow it.
Sorrow will rule me,
Feelings will do me.

I think deep down I know what's best,
Just hide some things, confess the rest.
The truth will make my spirit whole,
then I can safely save my soul.

Coz I've been thinking all day long,
that what I'm doing is so wrong.
I'm stretching things, I tend to linger,
Feel like I am an acting stringer...

Relliker

 

[soundboy]

i like that. can you load the lyrics up on a site so i can download them thanks .