You do get some very nice sound. The acoustic guitars sound terrific. And the vocals sound nice too! Couple of flat notes, but I'm guilty of that on occasion too.
1:15 ish..."I lost my head" I'd bring it up. I think the tone of voice should handle the dynamic well enough even if you keep the level normal. My reasoning is that the chorus comes in hard vocally, and the transition just seemed a bit unnatural. Minor, and just a little opinion.
Nice guitar solo! What I could hear of it...
On second listen, I'm only a little bit warm on the synth in the beginning. And I think it's because I crave something warmer. I like the notes, and I like the intent, but maybe a more natural piano with a good reverb on it would do it. In this particular situation, the contrast between the natural
acoustic guitar sound and the trebly, percussive, verbed out synth might be too much. Maybe just try a different patch? It doesn't suck or anything...I just think it could be improved with a new sound.
Bass? I don't know if it's just not there, or if it's just buried. You may already do this, but if it's buried, look for frequencies it's sharing with the guitars in the low to low mid-range. After careful analysis, decide which should represent that range more dominantly. Adjust by taking some of that range away from the tracks that need it least, until the mud is controlled. Then you may want to raise the levelsl of the tracks you subtracted from to compensate for resulting volume loss.
Nice tune....I really like what you've got going on here. And your last tune sounded great too! Keep 'em coming.
