OK kewl.... I appreciate the help.
I've remixed it slightly and added a background chorus harmony now.... The drums I brought down a bit but they're a sampled drum loop so the only way to bring down individual parts is to either totally re-do it by hand (something I"m seriously considering) or EQ the heck out of it.
I guess what I'm mainly wondering about is if this is a listenable song. Does it do anything for ya (keeping in mind there'll be an
acoustic guitar solo at the end and a pink floyd lead to fade out the song... as well as some little additional instruments on the extreme left and right pan to just add interest.....
Guess what I'm looking for is opinions from anybody about the vocals too (cause I'm not a vocalist and this is one of my first tries.... by first one was Goin Home
and people kept telling me I sounded like a 45 year old pervert or something.
I'm still trying to find a style I can work with that lets me not only use my vocals but add the advance guitar licks I post at GuitarTricks (
http://www.schmange.com)
I'd welcome any comments, compliments or just plain 'you suck' comments from anybody.
Thanks for taking the time.