Need Guidance on Original Song

[vic91218]

Once again I’m seeking the generosity of the board in lending me their criticisms, opinions, and advice on this original tune I’ve recently recorded. I’m having trouble mixing this song and am hoping I could get some advice. Of course, if it sounds ok, by all means say so. =) If it doesn’t, please be so kind to lend some advice on how I could improve it. Just as well, if you’d like to pass judgment on the song…I’d love to hear what my peers think of this odd melody.
Thanks,
-Vic

The song is of the Blues/Boogie Genre and can be heard here: http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album?aid=3873&alid=-1#18156

 

[Kramer]

Cool boogie woogie tune.Sounds fine to me except the bass sounds a little boomy/woofy.What are you monitoring on with while you mixdown?

The performance is top notch.Good playing and singing!

 

[vic91218]

Cool. Thanks for the tip. I'll see what I can do about the bass. Any more comments?? C'mon guys!!!!