need fresh ears

[spy said one]

i posted a rougher version of this to my myspace, but i've been working on mixing a bit since then, so i thought i'd run the current track by you guys to see if i could get some pointers:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/p6r4k4

 

[spy said one]

bump, with a little more info:

i made the song in Reason 3.0, and i'm trying to learn to get levels and EQ sounding better. when i made the song, i was planning on it being used for hip hop, but i'm not sure it's what i'll end up doing with it.