Need Feedback On Newly Finished Song

[Sartor]

Hey all, I just recorded my first song back to front using Cubase, a shure sm57, and a lot of patience due to power surges fucking up all my hardware every 30 minutes.

Vocals will be added soon, I just wanted to constructive criticism and feedback on what you all think of it so far. Thanks!

purevolume[dot]com/sartor

first on the list.

 

[gullyjewelz]

i will check it out and leave feedback if you do the same for me.. reverbnation.com/breadwinnaz - especially the first two songs tired of livin and middle fingers