Need advice with arrangement/composition.

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This a bit of an odd song.. im trying to make it work more as a whole piece rather than two things mushed together. I plan on extending the electronic part at the end by a little part, i would hope it would stay under 4 minutes :)
So basically anything you could say, i dont mind harsh criticism anyone i ask is too polite to me!
 
Work on the definition of the bass esp in the simple bits.
Try to keep the same vocal level relative to the backing.
The story link is too long with out some backing cross fade the end of one piece with the beginning of the link & then fade in the change at the other end.
I'd keep the vocal style closer to the 1st 1/2 in the 2nd & perhaps process it to give it an electtro edge.
Good ideas but the link passage is longer than the tag.
 
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