(Nano Cover) Chief Keef - I Don't Like *NEED FEEDBACK!*

[Nano905]

This is the first song I've recorded and I would like to get some honest feedback on how it sounds. I made a thread about this earlier but I didn't like the mix so I changed it but I don't think I can edit the OP so I made a new thread.
I use a Samson CO1U mic and used FL Studio to record and mix with Compressor, Limiter, Parametric EQ, and reverb.
My verse starts at 45s.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bCSWWOl9ucw&feature=g-crec-u

THANKS!

 

[jguitar_tm]

Is the buzzyness in the background tracks part of the style? I guess it is, but it gets kind of annoying. Almost like everything is really loud and clipping like crazy. Other than that, the vocals sound good.

 

[Nano905]

Is the buzzyness in the background tracks part of the style? I guess it is, but it gets kind of annoying. Almost like everything is really loud and clipping like crazy. Other than that, the vocals sound good.

Thanks. Do you have any idea how I can make my vocals sound similar to the one in the chorus? I want to get the same effect ie that "background" vocal tone when I say "a cocky bitch that's that shit I don't like" as the original rapper in the hook. Thanks

 

[TripleM]

I agree with the fuzzy kick. Sounds cool for a few seconds, then it gets distracting.

The little riff played on the keyboard is just a bit harsh.

There are spots in the mix where there are just too many things going on and it gets a little messy sounding.

Vocal delivery was good. Vocals in the verse sound a little dry and upfront. I might add a medium room reverb on them and pull them down 1-2 dbs.

 

[jguitar_tm]

Thanks. Do you have any idea how I can make my vocals sound similar to the one in the chorus? I want to get the same effect ie that "background" vocal tone when I say "a cocky bitch that's that shit I don't like" as the original rapper in the hook. Thanks

I really couldn't tell you. I'm not actually a fan of the genre, but I thought I'd give it a listen.