My song

[wilko]

Can you go to my sig and play "Passerby". I know the mix isn't great but can I have a critique on the song?

 

[up-fiddler]

What I could hear I liked. It is a struggle (for me) to listen to the vox. The panned acoustic guitars are in roughly the same frequency range as the vox and compete pretty vigorously. I would either pull the guitars down or roll off some high eq to try to make a bit more space for your vox. Like the song but the mix sturggles a bit for my ears. Definately not trying to offend, this is jmho.

 

[Nicole_Rose]

Can you go to my sig and play "Passerby". I know the mix isn't great but can I have a critique on the song?

the song isn't long enough.

it's hard to tell what the lyrics are exactly as they are not always loud enough for my taste, but the their flow is good. and what i can hear of them is good. the melody is good, and the staggered vocals are cool.

there's no lead instrument section and that always disappoints me. i would add a section for one or two instruments to shine.

other than that all i can say is nice

 

[wilko]

What I could hear I liked. It is a struggle (for me) to listen to the vox. The panned acoustic guitars are in roughly the same frequency range as the vox and compete pretty vigorously. I would either pull the guitars down or roll off some high eq to try to make a bit more space for your vox. Like the song but the mix sturggles a bit for my ears. Definately not trying to offend, this is jmho.

No - all suggestions gratefully received. I will have another bash this weekend.!