My sister's cute little dance pop jingle

[loquat]

This is my first post on this forum. So please go easy on me. My sisters wrote this song during the summer for a little online contest. When they were done I spent a couple hours trying tidy it up. It sounded dark and muddy and I tried to brighten it up.

http://soundcloud.com/jessica729911

Any thoughts are welcome. warning because the song is written by an 10 and 11 year old it can get well annoying but it seems to suit that age group.

 

[kurtdaniel]

really cute!!! love it.. electro music are just irresistible.. please post some more!!..
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