My rap joints

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you'll need to give some as well. if you check out the threads you will see we are a high feed back community and all it takes to get some is to give some and believe me you'll have more feedback than you can handle.
 
Couldnt really listen on account of all the noise...
It would behoove you to get a better mic
Im not tryna be mean or anything, but it sounds like your about 37 trying to rap...
Maybe change your style or your pattern up or something...
 
^"Im not tryna be mean or anything, but it sounds like your about 37 trying to rap...

Now I gotta listen...
 
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hmmm sounds like princess superstar

lol

i dont know what to say about this

peace
LB
 
it is hard to say..but i think she can do better..she have to talk clear in the mic..she got a nice flow and a different sound that will set her apart from other female rappers..she just have to find the right level to use your voice...the beat really dont go with the vocals on pants on..i like the beat on smooth..just got to get the vocals clean..good try or a 1st try..i think
 
soundboy said:
you'll need to give some as well. if you check out the threads you will see we are a high feed back community and all it takes to get some is to give some and believe me you'll have more feedback than you can handle.
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I will peep this out once you've peeped a few other peoples' stuff.

You've had some reviews already and they have all asked you to peep other peoples' stuff so I think it's fair.
 
bknot1 said:
yeah..we love to give feedback as long as you give feedback..i will check this out lata..


http://www.soundclick.com/knotmeproductions
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what up bknot, I'll give u some feedback. I think you got good rhymes.On the song Blah!!, I think the horn sound is a lil too loud it's almost draining away the voice. The only problem is I think you need to have more emotion on the way you rap, that's just what I think. You can either be as boring as Mase/Loon when you rap or you can be as hype as 2pac/Biggie. To me, the raps are lil boring although your rhymes are good. I like the beat on Out the door.
 
smooth - i like the intro, the voice of the rapper is different but sometimes goes off the beat. this needs a lot of work on the mix and the vocals need a bit of work mixing-wise and effect-wise.

pants on - rapper keeps the beat better on this one, vocals need to be mixed better. better than the other but needs a lot of mixing work still.

THe beats could also do with some change-ups.

btw is it u rapping?
 
lol..of course it's me rappin otherwise i wouldn't have name the topic "my rap joints"
 
How old are you?
What kind of setup do you have?









Crossed Up...
 
thanks for the feedback but i dont rap..i just make the beats...thats my boy from NY rappin ..but good info anyway..but u should leave feedback on the topics when we post...
 
bknot1 said:
she got a nice flow and a different sound that will set her apart from other female rappers.
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I don’t think she sounds different. She sounds like she’s tryna be either like Lefteye or Natina from Blaque.
 
ok i listen again ...and your right but i still think u got a little different flow then the others
 
My .02

I played the first track and as soon as the hissin came in,, It lost me. I did listen to it though. It sways up and down... If that makes any since to ya

I liked pants kinda, kinda reminded me of Vanity 6 with the track and all.

I saw your equip list. I would get a better mic and learn where it works best for you. Also your rap style is different, to me. It does kinda put you in the mind of Left Eye or Blaque with a slurrd type of flow.

The first things I would work on would be the Timing ( Rap ) and pronunciating the words clearer and all the way through. Watch those deep breaths too. Lay one vocal track that you can flow comfortably and tehn 2 or more so to accent the words you didnt get out as well.

Oh, and get a Pop Filter

Malcolm
 
Well TLC is one of my favorite groups.
and oh, what do ya'll mean by I got flows? do you mean rhymes? the way I rap or what?
 
wussup

vocals aren't clear at all. Voice in the verses kinda sound like Magoo(no offense). This is OK i guess, just promise me that if you get your shot that you wont introduce yourself to the world with a sex charged debut. I seldom respect that from female emcees.

2nd track is garbage.

Dont quit though, keep at it
 
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