My Pretty Song

  • Thread starter Thread starter cramer21
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hi

not bad

my suggestions:

- bring vocals a bit louder, it seems a little thin to me. although it may be cause i haven't got it very loud

- rhythm guitar to me, sounds a little out of sync or out of time or something. performance wise could be tighter.

- maybe take the metrodome out, and put real drums in
 
Thanks Sandwiched for the response.
At first I thought metronome...huh?
Then I went back and you are correct, it DID record it.
There are drums (drum machine generated), but they need to go up.
I am really beginning to find out that recording is just as much an artform as playing. I know I can play guitar, and write ok, but putting it all together is a bitch!
Now i know why there are engineers for the pros...they can just concentrate on playing, and let the engineers/producers do the fine tuning and such.

My next endevour will be more in my "comfort zone"....R&B, Bluesy, ROCK.....that song was mainly for my daughter.

Thanks again for the feedback...I cant get better if I dont hear honest critique's.
 
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