My Policy Is

[Irwin abrigo]

I would like to thank all those who had given a reply to my last post here. Thanks again.

Please have a listen to my song "My Policy Is" I think it as something going on with it.

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Irwin Abrigo
songwriter

My Policy Is
©2005 Irwin Abrigo


(V1)
Some girls say, without money
they would fall in love
but I say without any gold and diamonds
you can’t love me.
Let’s face the fact and what is that
girls need lots of things
now let’s think


She needs pedicure, manicure
going out to the stores
buying clothes, fancy things
shoes and ear rings


(Chorus)
And my policy is, a girl needs to be happy
no money no love, no love without money. (Repeat)


(V2)
Some guys say the world, will end tomorrow
and they don’t care
they think they can go around breaking hearts
and get away, hey hey yeah
Though love is blind
I know you’ll find
girl need to life her life
now that’s right


She needs perfume, hairdo
lots of things she can do
going out, having fun, seeing places
(Repeat Chorus)


(V3)
Boys you wouldn’t brake my heart
right from the start
like easy comes easy goes
so girlfriend let them know
girl needs to be happy
know love, know love
without money


my policy is, no money no love
my policy is, no money no love
No love, without money, without money

 

[up-fiddler]

my policy is, no money no love
my policy is, no money no love
No love, without money, without money

I really like the chorus. It has an acoustic rock/Springsteen kind of feel to me when I read it. Don't be afraid to repeat it more often. It feels out of place with the rest of the lyric but thats just me. When I hear it it may mean more to me. All in all, good effort.

 

[ido1957]

Really great theme for a song Irwin. Although my wife would probably disagree with that comment

 

[timboZ]

Cool song. I dig the vocals.

I think real drums would add a lot of life to the song.

 

[Freddy]

I like it. Very nice feel!