My new tracks

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Always Hate Me -
- good songwriting, the bridge has an especially "tasty" chord progression
- your vocal range into the falsetto gives the song your unique styling
- short and sweet, but contains good verse/chorus/bridge components
- good lyrics, melody and chord progression
- definitely mainstream/pop quality
- although you didn't specify feedback on the mix, I would tame some of the tails on the echos.
- the drum pattern doesn't seem to match the melody/chord pattern.

:) :D :) :D
 
ido1957 said:
Always Hate Me -
- good songwriting, the bridge has an especially "tasty" chord progression
- your vocal range into the falsetto gives the song your unique styling
- short and sweet, but contains good verse/chorus/bridge components
- good lyrics, melody and chord progression
- definitely mainstream/pop quality
- although you didn't specify feedback on the mix, I would tame some of the tails on the echos.
- the drum pattern doesn't seem to match the melody/chord pattern.

:) :D :) :D

Thanks for this!
In didnt notice about the drum pattern untill you mentioned it, i might give a go changing it around a little.

The tails most definatelty need to be tamed!

Thanks for the comments :)
 
I like the piano on It's Gone. For my ear the vox could go up a bit in the mix. The song is great. Good luck with the album. It has a catchy name ;) and people like that. $1.00-.98 from me.
 
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