hmmm... guitars need some of the boominess worked out of them, and depending on what happens after that need to be brought down a bit - then the vocals a bit higher. Yeah i know you said they need work, but stuff that needs work is what gets commented on usually

...The vox seem a little overwhelmed by the guitars at the moment. I do like the vocal style, anyway, I appreciate a good screamer.
Other than that I am kind of having a hard time hearing the snare... and the kick could use a boost in the 80 hz range, while taking out some of the mids... I have a feeling it would make the beat of the song (which is a little bit non-typical) make more sense. with the snare I can't hear enough to say what might work "eq" wise, but... anyway overall I think if things worked together better in this mix it would be... well better

just austin powers'd that.
as far as performance goes, I'd have to listen to the track a bunch more than I have, but it might benefit in spots if the takes were "nailed" moreso. that's a comment I get sometimes, too, but I guess teach what you lack in >_<