My First Offering to this Highly Respected Clinic

[Freudian Slip]

Listened to 13 year itch!! sounds cool. I hear the Ozzy for sure.
I personaly would trim back the chorus (effect) on the vocals some.

It sounds like this might have been recorded wet??


I'm looking forward tho the other songs.


F.S.

 

[M.Brane]

Dark & heavy!

Good tunes. I like your vocals and dissonant harmonies.

The drummer sounds "tentative", like he's not sure exactly what he's doing. Tension is good but not constantly.

Guitar sounds out of tune in a few spots, like he uses really light strings and frets too hard.

The mix sounded really thin & distant on my old Altecs but better on my JBL's. They have a scooped mid and no highs above 15K like most modern home stereo speakers. The Altecs are pretty accurate (read:unflattering).

Not bad for a rush job.