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RAMI
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ROFL.....um....no.
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Greg_L
Banned
Lol. I love it when people jump in with ridiculous self-hype and then don't deliver.
ido1957
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Jesus Christ got effed in the manger????
Well the lyrics are....interesting....lots of profanity which doesn't appeal to me personally.
The mix is clipping all over the place when the beats come in. I suggest you turn down the level and clean that up. It sounds like "profanity". The intro is too low compared to the beats (but the beats are too loud.)
The UK accent is quite apealling - it can prove a benefit to the sale of this product. The rest is pretty "regular" beat stuff but the vocals set it apart from the usual fare.
Well the lyrics are....interesting....lots of profanity which doesn't appeal to me personally.
The mix is clipping all over the place when the beats come in. I suggest you turn down the level and clean that up. It sounds like "profanity". The intro is too low compared to the beats (but the beats are too loud.)
The UK accent is quite apealling - it can prove a benefit to the sale of this product. The rest is pretty "regular" beat stuff but the vocals set it apart from the usual fare.
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Mervyn_perving
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@Idol
Thanks man for the critism and the kick up the arse.I'm still a n00b to be honest moved from a MPC to Ableton so still learning the ropes.Thought id try and get some feedback from a Professiona recording forum and it has worked so thank you dude.Time to raise my game!!!.
Thanks man for the critism and the kick up the arse.I'm still a n00b to be honest moved from a MPC to Ableton so still learning the ropes.Thought id try and get some feedback from a Professiona recording forum and it has worked so thank you dude.Time to raise my game!!!.
rayc
retroreprobate
1st track Intro too long, bass drum too loud.
the effected vocals are a waste of space as they're unintelligible, grating & do nought to enhance the track.
Your lyrics & rapping aren't bad - the offence meter went off the scale though.
Ido is right - your accent could be a benefit so use it - make it clearer & more attractive by making the vocals clearer and ditch the chipmunk bits.
the effected vocals are a waste of space as they're unintelligible, grating & do nought to enhance the track.
Your lyrics & rapping aren't bad - the offence meter went off the scale though.
Ido is right - your accent could be a benefit so use it - make it clearer & more attractive by making the vocals clearer and ditch the chipmunk bits.
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Mervyn_perving
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Thanks for listening and the feedback R
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laz777
New member
How we laughed at my wife's head gash? You're totally nuts. It's your dime though. The tittle cracked me up.