More Fire!!!!!

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HEY!!!!


TEEEEECHAAAAA!!!!



LEAVE THEM KIDS ALONE!!!!!!





Uhm.... man i am no expert on zzisss stuff mang but i likey liked what wuz comin out of my speakers.

It sounds reeely nice produced, the drums were nice and fat the vox were warm clear, i liked the trumpet like samples. I turned it up pretty loud, i didn't notice any problems on the lows or the highs. Everything held together nicely.

Overall excellent job teach, keep up the good work.
 
thanks...it wasn't a horn sample...its one of the combi patches off the karma...a fuckkin amazing keyboard IMHO
 
I like your work, there is really a lot more 'music' in this track than is usually presented in this genre, of Rap ... hip hop.

There is room for some brief string section 'motif' or 'fixed ideas' ... idee fixee. Not just 'orchestra hits' ... I mean a little string trio that 'recaptures' or 'restates' the musical material.

I do not have any music in my portfolio from this genre, and I think our viewpoints may be close. Do you listen to Paris, he's brilliant.

PM me if you want real violin, viola and cello in one of your productions, no rush ...

Also, be very careful with the vocal levels at all times, your 'lyrical message' is the most important element here.

Get friends who have never heard the song and ask them to write as much of the lyric as they can in the first listening. If they can't get at least 90% in this genre, then you need to check your meters.

Remember, you can hear the lyrics in your 'sleep', we have never heard them before, and ... are unfamiliar with your linguistic 'style'.
 
Sounds excellent to me.

I like the lyrics volume and all, leave it there.

Not my thing but I totally dig it.
 
studioviols said:
I like your work, there is really a lot more 'music' in this track than is usually presented in this genre, of Rap ... hip hop.

There is room for some brief string section 'motif' or 'fixed ideas' ... idee fixee. Not just 'orchestra hits' ... I mean a little string trio that 'recaptures' or 'restates' the musical material.

I do not have any music in my portfolio from this genre, and I think our viewpoints may be close. Do you listen to Paris, he's brilliant.

PM me if you want real violin, viola and cello in one of your productions, no rush ...

Also, be very careful with the vocal levels at all times, your 'lyrical message' is the most important element here.

Get friends who have never heard the song and ask them to write as much of the lyric as they can in the first listening. If they can't get at least 90% in this genre, then you need to check your meters.

Remember, you can hear the lyrics in your 'sleep', we have never heard them before, and ... are unfamiliar with your linguistic 'style'.
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you are definitly right...thats y i posted it here to make sure shit was good...not just me thinking that...
 
Took me forever to find this post.
Good groove and overall production. I was digging it.
 
Sounds good to me. It's a little nitpick but I could stand to have that "rattlesnake" sound a little lower. And I think I'd nudge the lead vox up by just a cunt hair - maybe a quarter of a db.

The highs and lows are pretty hyped, yeah. But for this kinda stuff you kinda have to do that.

Good job.

Chris
 
Rap & stuff... ok... yeeeeah.. yo... raps...

Not a bad production... not too familiar w/the genre... would like
almost a doubled rap on the main one... kinda like you did with the male voice...
but with the highs boosted on one track, compressed down paper flat, and slightly
delayed for clarity in contrast to the other. They do sound a bit dry.

But this is really well done... the "choruses" are "tighter" in that they
make good use of delay...

Maybe panning stuff hard, then bringing it into the middle... and moving the
voice around some w/delays would add some more interest.

Proper!


Chad
 
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