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dvsbruchko
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Since I've given some feedback on other people's lyrics, I thought it was only fair to put out one of my songs from my old band (which has since fallen apart). We performed this song once for our biggest crowd (800 people), but the band didn't stick around long enough to find out how it went over. Let me know what you think, thanks.
The dreams all have at night,
They exist but once a day
And like the shadows on the wall, we know
They're real but fade away
And so the tendency remains
Construct our own world of belief
To gain control in being lost
For just a moment of relief
Chorus: You want to escape
And so you try
All conscienceness is lost
And all resolve denied
And still you suffer on
With nowhere to run and hide
Interlude: After the end
What was this fighting for
After the end
Still marching on and on... (pause)
All that I've known
All that I've seen
The fires of hell, and the coldness of space
And all the stages in between
Drown the thoughts with time
Or are the curtains already drawn
And is the lack of light, that now fills your eyes
Finally enough
Somber score composed
Heard in heavens, one to cry
Frozen tears of rain, on open graves
Resound the last goodbye
end Chorus
--the song was written about overcoming addiction problems in general and what I've seen happen
On that note, any comments
?
The dreams all have at night,
They exist but once a day
And like the shadows on the wall, we know
They're real but fade away
And so the tendency remains
Construct our own world of belief
To gain control in being lost
For just a moment of relief
Chorus: You want to escape
And so you try
All conscienceness is lost
And all resolve denied
And still you suffer on
With nowhere to run and hide
Interlude: After the end
What was this fighting for
After the end
Still marching on and on... (pause)
All that I've known
All that I've seen
The fires of hell, and the coldness of space
And all the stages in between
Drown the thoughts with time
Or are the curtains already drawn
And is the lack of light, that now fills your eyes
Finally enough
Somber score composed
Heard in heavens, one to cry
Frozen tears of rain, on open graves
Resound the last goodbye
end Chorus
--the song was written about overcoming addiction problems in general and what I've seen happen
On that note, any comments
?
