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Touke
New member
I'm new here and I recorded this a few months ago. How does it sound?
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BigRed360
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Is there a bass guitar in there? If not, there should be. If so, it should come up. The bottom end just seems to be missing a bit...
rayc
retroreprobate
Hello New here, how are you?
Bass is MIA even if it is there. The whole bottom end of the track is on holiday.
I keep saying it but the guitar sound in modern metal is boring because it is so GENERIC that I wonder if everyone is using the same rig & settings. Why not dial in something a little more original. All the way down to the occasional squeal this is competent but metal by numbers.
The synth bit was a nice change.
It couldn't really be intended as an instrumental could it? There's not thread, focus or accent point to hold attantion. This needs a melody: vocal or instrumental to maintain interest.
THings are a bit muddy, that'd be the effect/settings on the guitars - you'll need to clean some of that up.
The cymblas didn't shine. The snare was OK & the kick/bass drum is Milo tin ld sounding so it fits the genre's requirements.
All a bit busy & lacking in dynamics from my perspective - a melody may be able to add the missing changes & add soe loud soft to the dynamics too.
pretty good start - keep at it.
Bass is MIA even if it is there. The whole bottom end of the track is on holiday.
I keep saying it but the guitar sound in modern metal is boring because it is so GENERIC that I wonder if everyone is using the same rig & settings. Why not dial in something a little more original. All the way down to the occasional squeal this is competent but metal by numbers.
The synth bit was a nice change.
It couldn't really be intended as an instrumental could it? There's not thread, focus or accent point to hold attantion. This needs a melody: vocal or instrumental to maintain interest.
THings are a bit muddy, that'd be the effect/settings on the guitars - you'll need to clean some of that up.
The cymblas didn't shine. The snare was OK & the kick/bass drum is Milo tin ld sounding so it fits the genre's requirements.
All a bit busy & lacking in dynamics from my perspective - a melody may be able to add the missing changes & add soe loud soft to the dynamics too.
pretty good start - keep at it.
ido1957
9K Gold Member
Your guitar sounds like it is out of tune in spots. It sounds like four songs strung together. Good playing and the guitar/drums/lead levels sound good to me. It sounds like this took a while to compose guitar and drums for, pretty complex...