mediocrity...

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Hey Everybody -

My new song just went up: "The Great Mediocrity Making Machine." It's based on a conversation I had in bar with an old drunk way back when. Recorded everything in a couple of hours. It was really raining that day - I live in Japan, and the weather's kind of changable this time of year - stepped out on the balcony and recorded it.

Check it out - it's the song at the top of the page:

http://www.mp3.com/UncleEthan

I'd love some feedback on it.

Cheers - a pint of Asahi to your health -

Ethan
 
Great tune.
"You're living a life of decreasing significance."
Great line!
The only thing that detracted from this tune was some of the sloppy noodling on the guitar as a fill; but only some of it. A noodling track was well suited to the tune. Just tighten it up a tad.
I just checked my can of Asahi and saw that it was brewed in Toronto by Molson! F$%K!!!!!
 
Hey I really like this! A country poet from Japan. Crazy.

I've always enjoyed the half music/half storytelling style...and this certainly doesn't disappoint on either half!

Some of your acting was a little bit transparent...like the very last few lines were overdone...but for the most part the vocals were interesting and believable. The guitars in the background were cool. And I liked the "traffic" sounds...although they could have been turned down quite a bit and they still would have been effective...at a couple points they sort of interfered with the lyrics.

I really enjoyed this, I might have to listen to a couple more of your tunes.

Slackmaster 2000
 
Uncle Ethan Earns His Keep is a GRREEEAT tune!

"Pass around those demo tapes to the sympathetic"
 
Thanks for the honest feedback everybody. I've taken the suggestions to heart and am going to try remixing (and maybe re-recording) the track tonight. Thanks for listening everybody -

Cheers - Ethan

And as for Asahi brewed by Labatt in Toronto, the last time I passed through Canada, I picked up a few bottles of Guiness, and sure enough, they were also brewed by Labatt. F%*K!
 
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