Lost

[subvibe]

Hi
i have done a new song , its a bit different than my usual chill out style
this has a Melancholy feel to it . Its uncomplicated & i have tried a
guitar type solo in the middle

View attachment Lost.mp3



Thanks for taking the time to listen

subvibe

 

[packrobottom]

Sounds real good vocals are smooth melody is catchy for this genre. As usual I wish the guitars were real but that's personal preference. Only thing not working for me is the guitar solo. It sounds like keyboard guitar or samples/loops either way it has no continuitity and the phrasing doesn't make sense. You can be abstract and avant guard but you need some type of melody. One of the pitch bends is out. 1:28 sounds ok and The octave effect on the last bar sounds good tho. 2:29 vocal first syllable gets clipped and or pitch correct artifact needs fixing. Also you'll get more feedback if you actually help/comment on others too as I notice you pretty much never comment on anyone's music but your own.