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hhinterwebz
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Music was done by Elliot Waite. i did the vocals and made da graphic for da vidya.
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hhinterwebz
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it's a sequel in the snow woman series:
Brian Miller
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I'm guessing the auto-tune was dialed up to maximum for effect, intentionally. I personally hate that sound, so it's hard to look past it. I don't see any need for it in this song. I think a nice, smooth, solid vocal would suit the electronic background and pull the listener in better. As soon as I heard the robotic auto-tune sound it pulled me out of the trance I was happily in. Very jarring.
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NotThatBright
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Where the heck are the turtles and/or cats?
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hhinterwebz
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fakas
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I think the song would benefit from better auto tune automation, since it's exaggerated in some words. I'd also open the stereo image a bit.
rayc
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Lost In Her cave - I thought it was a poor sexual inuendo.
The PONG sound effect comes straight out of Apple 2e.
The bass could use a little tightening.
Snow Woman, the animation was offputting.
The pun (how could she be so cold) wasn't too flash.
Turtle thing - musically that was so generic I could get it in HomeBrand at Woolworths.
The homey satire - misfire sorry.
Leave the vids alone, work on your vocals and use melodyne subtly if you really must use it.
The PONG sound effect comes straight out of Apple 2e.
The bass could use a little tightening.
Snow Woman, the animation was offputting.
The pun (how could she be so cold) wasn't too flash.
Turtle thing - musically that was so generic I could get it in HomeBrand at Woolworths.
The homey satire - misfire sorry.
Leave the vids alone, work on your vocals and use melodyne subtly if you really must use it.
mjbphotos
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Lost In Her Cave - I won't crit the autotune, I guess that's the sound you want, but the music doesn't go anywhere (for me) - guess this is what today's "space cadets" listen to? The 'pong' sound was too loud and the bass-keys were too distorted/clipping for me
Snow Woman - painfully out-of-tune female singer (autotune was in another key?)
Brenda - painfully childish lyrics delivered by a young cookie monster, the electronic kick was too loud.
Snow Woman - painfully out-of-tune female singer (autotune was in another key?)
Brenda - painfully childish lyrics delivered by a young cookie monster, the electronic kick was too loud.
paddedcell
Doggy Claws
Lost in her Cave -- it sets a mood, but doesn't really go anywhere with it. At the end I was waiting for more, but it was all gone. Liked the synth sounds (pong-effect was OK by me), and the vocals were smooth but artificial (I guess this is what you were going for?). It sounds like an interesting start that wanted to become a song, but really didn't. . .
Snow Woman -- couldn't connect with this at all. Not anyone's fault, there just wasn't anything for me there.
Brenda -- the intro was pretty standard stuff, done nicely enough, but the "comedy" wasn't to my taste. . .
I notice that the music on these is by other people (?). Do you just add the vocals and the vids, or is this a collaborative effort?
Snow Woman -- couldn't connect with this at all. Not anyone's fault, there just wasn't anything for me there.
Brenda -- the intro was pretty standard stuff, done nicely enough, but the "comedy" wasn't to my taste. . .
I notice that the music on these is by other people (?). Do you just add the vocals and the vids, or is this a collaborative effort?