Looking for opinions.

[DouglasRichmond]

Here's the current track I'm working on:
Good Friday Song (Mix2) by douglasallenrichmond on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Just wondering how the vocal sounds. Still working on the mix, but staying objective on the vocal is next to impossible.


Thank You,

Douglas

 

[RockinRobby]

The vocal is very good, but there is too much (way) too much dynamics on the guitar? I understand you're playing with emotion. But the dynamics need to be tamed "considerably." If you can't do it with your technique, then you're going to need a nice brick wall limiter after a compressor.

You may want to consider laying down a track w/vox like this, and listen to it, and play along with it to record the guitar with smoother dynamics? Then you could go back and listen to that and sing the vox.

Also, it's naked? It needs production. Could be great in the end.