Looking for a song/band critique

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I have a video from our show a couple days ago. The quality isn't to great, but I was wondering if anybody had comments about the song itself. Not looking for mix critiques, as its just video from a digital still camera. I think there are a few things that could be changed to make the song better - just wondering if anyone else hears it (or anything else).

Thanks in advance!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oh8-936bZGU

:D
 
I think it's a good song with some complex chord structure. I think the vocal approach could be better - the singer in the video is singing short barking phrases whereas I would take longer phrases with melodic/countermelodic lines. YMMV, IMO etc.

Looks like a fun show.

/jealous
 
The band is small and kind of blurry. I'd work on being larger and more in-focus. :D

I'd work on your stage presence. The vocalist, drummer, and guy on the right (bassist?) are moving around with the music and look like they're having a good time. The keyboardist and other guitarist are just standing there and playing. I usually find that having a guy just standing there sucks the life out of the whole performance.

Jump around; have fun; hit some wrong notes! It's worth it!

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Oh yeah, you guys play well enough. You've obviously put a lot of work into your music. No problems there.
 
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I think the song is okay.. hard to tell with the camera's audio. Watching the audience, I didn't see anyone grooving or really getting into it, but you got some good applause....

Looks like a nice venue to play at.
 
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