Listen to this!

[zumdiggidy]

This is something I did with Cakewalk 8 Pro .....
I want an honest critique....
(I know the lyrics are kinda silly, it's just my two friends screwing around the day we graduated from High School....)

 

[gibs]

Hey I could actually understand the words...I liked the vocals being up front...maybe the bass was too much though...good rhymes...good flow...It was pretty cool...it touched butt...gibs

 

[MrLip]

I guess the bass is a little loud.

The 'bitch bitch bitch' part is kinda loud too.

The vox sounds good and I like the strings.

The lyrics are pretty funny though. It's a nice change to hear something like this in here. The more variety the better.

 

[Nate]

Ho'in!

 

[Eurythmic]

Rap with originality - imagine that! Good tune. Enjoyed it.
The echoed parts (bitch-itch-itch) could stand to be turned down a little, though.