Listen to These Glasses

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Hello all. This is my first post in many months.

The new one is These Glasses. (you can listen to the others if you wish and throw out any feedback as well)

I'm still working on this thing, but I'm not sure what else to do with this(if anything). One thing I do know, I need to tone down the guitar stabs.

Let me know what you think. All opinions are welcome ands respected.

Thanks.


http://www.nowhereradio.com/rpg/singles
 
It sounds to me like your drum tracks aren't lined up correctly.
 
the negatives would be bad timing problems, vocal intonation in places and canned sounding instruments. The timing is the worst offender.

Song has a good start, but needs the problems addressed for sure.
 
hey...

the timing is REALLY bad. how did you even manage to record it with that bad timing?

it sounds like you recorded the track, then manually shifted the click track out of phase.

ignoring that aspect, the guitars sounded really thin. the drum sounded really cheesy and fake. i guess it is a drum machine though.

the vocals are pretty bad. just the singer's voice in general really dull, emotionless, kindda mumbled his words out.

i guess the only thing good i can say is the bass line was well written. although the bass sounded very "midi" also.

thanks for sharing.
 
Thanks for the feedback.

I am in the process of retooling this thing. I am tesring it down and building it back up.

Thanks
 
Listen to these glasses

wow, for a second there I thought you filled a bunch of glasses with water and went to town. hmm?
 
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