Very cool , really liked the outro. This kinda sounded like a big arena or metal band getting on the punk side. I think the heavy drum kit was pulling it away from the punkish vibe (if that's what you were going for) and burying the bass. Enjoyed it .. mark
I agree with above. The bass needs more low end. What’s it high passed to. The actual tone sounds good. I like the string attack and all. The lead guitar sounds a little too loud. It’s louder than the drums. I’d bring that down a little.
You’re close for sure
The bass is better. Now I'm hearing (I think) the drums ever so slightly out of time - lagging behind the bass. They're not destroying the tune, just sucking some energy from it.