Le Royale - The Words

[Bo0n]

Hi lovely people!

It's been a while, but I've done it. It's finished and would love to share with you! Feedback and love is welcome!

 

[Bulls Hit]

This is pretty interesting. You've got some cool melodies. The vocals are real good. The start is a bit sudden though, like you chopped some off by accident. My only nit with the mix is when you get bashing on the crash cymbal, it's slightly prominent on the left. Good tune though, nice job

 

[Tom Paul]

This is very interesting. I'd like to hear the vocals more...a db or two...same with the background vox. I agree that the beginning is abrupt. Nice singing. The song is kind of all over the place...like it has too many parts..like the instrumental at 1:55. For me, 5.11 minutes is a bit long...you could make the point of this tune in less time.

 

[rayc]

Some sibilance to be dealt with on the vocal intro.
The piano seems to loud to me.
That cymbal is - well, annoying!
Some good stuff though.