A "train wreck" would be a little strong. Sounded pretty good to me. The drums and keys sound alot like a casio keyboard to me, not that thats a bad thing. Its just, I like the human error aspect in the rythym section. Not my style of music either, but as to the recording and mixing, not bad at all (not that I'm a pro myself) But I thought it good. Nice work.
StudioHermit, thanks for the reply. You have good ears, yes the piano and drums are a ...well, a Yamaha keyboard....not that it's any better than a Casio. I'm far from a professional myself so I just have some modest equip but it gets the point across for my purposes. I'm in a band but I would never subject them to record anything like this! They'd probably die of laughter!