Couldn't help it, had to pipe up knowing the combined age of this band is probably younger than my guitar...
Drums are definately overpowering the mix, need to be pushed back, and possibly re-recorded, they're clipping more often than not. Kick disappears, snare sounds like it's getting soft in the middle from a few hard hits. Cymbals, are way too loud and up front.
Lead vox sound good from what I can hear, maybe a bit more soft verb, definately volume issues there, until the drums are softened, hard to tell how much though.
Bass has got an interesting tone, I'd drop the eq on it a bit, and definately turn it up. Until there was the odd 'silent' part, I could hardly hear it. We wanna hear you! We wanna hear all of you!
The 'intro' section overall is quieter than the rest of the mix, sounds like it was recorded at a different time, with different mic positions, etc.. In short, it doesn't quite fit the song, sounds almost as if some other song ended on the AM radio and you switched over to an FM station, while turning up the volume...
The guitar disappears as well, can hardly comment on tone, as honestly I can't seperate it enough. Again, when the drums are dropped lower, it'll be easier to tell.
Dynamically, tone wise, overall okay, except for them cymbals, over 4 listens, my head swoons every time he hits that crash.
Decent track for the age, a little work, and a lot of polish may get the job done.
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