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TheAddicted
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Hey guys, just thought I'd post some lyrics here and maybe get some help/critique.
That's pretty much the entire song, kind of like a pop-punk/post-hardcore kind of beat.
Thing is, I didn't think of chords yet (well.. I did but still trying to perfect the song)
Plan is to first write chords, then the melody based off the chords.
So if anyone has a suggestion about key/chords you're more than welcome to help
As for the lyrics, you judge.
I think I did a pretty good job
(Verse)
You came home drunk
Like the night before
I kicked you out
And now you're at my door
(Prechorus)
But the sound of your voice
The look in your eyes
Your lovely words
Your filthy lies
(Chorus)
You make me feel loved
For the very first time
The way you scream my name
Leaves me wondering why
You make me feel loved
For the very first time
The way you scream my name
Makes me think that you're mine
(Verse)
Pack up your junk
You're leaving tonight
Can't stand your shit
And you know that I'm right
(Prechorus)
(Chorus x2)
(Bridge)
So we fight
We break up
We still try
To move on
And you can't
No you can't
Yeah we can't
Just say
(Chorus)
That you make me feel loved
For the very first time
The way you scream my name
Leaves me wondering why
You make me feel loved
For the very first time
The way you scream my name
Makes me think that you're
Mine.
That's pretty much the entire song, kind of like a pop-punk/post-hardcore kind of beat.
Thing is, I didn't think of chords yet (well.. I did but still trying to perfect the song)
Plan is to first write chords, then the melody based off the chords.
So if anyone has a suggestion about key/chords you're more than welcome to help

As for the lyrics, you judge.
I think I did a pretty good job

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