just felt like sharing a couple, to see what y'all think.

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I've been writing for a long while now, I've got some losers and what I think are some winners.
let me know what you think of these few:


Song For You
I'm feeling numb again today,
I think I'll be okay.
but I don't know just where to begin again.
how can I move on with my life?

and it hurts what you did,
there's nothing left to say,
I just need some time away.
best laid plans have gone to waste
the normal method of dealing
is living in the song.

but I am hardly broken
I'm not a shell of myself
but if I let things get too far
I might wake up and I won't be forgiving myself


but it hurts what you did,
there's nothing left to say,
I just need some time away.
best laid plans have gone to waste
the normal method of dealing
is living in the...

song for you but I don't want you thinking I still care
song for you because in my head you're barely there
pictures fade until there's nothing left...
I can only hope the same goes for myself.


and it hurts what you did,
there's nothing left to say,
I just need some time away.
best laid plans have gone to waste
the normal method of dealing
is living in the song.

END


The Scenery

get out of my head
I'm taking control of things for awhile,
just thought I'd let you know

get out of my head,
'cause I never asked for any of this
and where's the self control?

Sometimes it seems to me,
that you won't let me go,
because of the scenery
but I don't know the way.

get out of my head,
but stay in my soul
at least for awhile
to help me out of this hole.


Sometimes it seems to me,
that you won't let me go,
because of the scenery
I don't want to betray.

Don't let me go!
Don't let me go!
Don't let me go!
Today......!

get out of my head
I'm taking control of things for awhile
I thought I'd let you know.

END


It Has To Be This Way

I came here to write you off,
not to rehash the past with you
believe me you're better off,
I can't help what you're going through
pretend that we never met
and we'll both go our seperate ways
well it hasn't killed me yet,
I can't think of a better way.

I'll walk on by,
you turn and cough,
pretend that you don't notice me
I won't invite you for a talk
because that's all you'll need
to punish me.

I came here to write you off
not to hear what you're going through
now I'm feeling really small
but I know it's the right thing to do.
when you keep on coming back,
saying how you can't live alone
I don't know how to act,
when you're here I can't hang up the phone
no no no...


I'll walk on by,
you turn and cough,
pretend that you don't notice me
I won't invite you for a talk
because that's all you'll need
to punish me.

I'm sorry that it has to be this way....(6x...building)

Chorus out.

END

(sorry such a long post.)
Jeff
 
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