(Judge Me By My) Hairdo - Finished?

[Todzilla]

Latest/Final version of Hairdo <- Click this Mess.

Looking for feedback on my latest tune. Please tell me whether or not it causes uncontrollable foot stomping to the point of hip displaysia. - that was my basic goal.

Now on to tackle some faux electronica...

Thanks in Advance,

-Todzilla

Oh yes, and here are the lyrics to Hairdo:
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Pay no attention to the things I'm saying
Or the kind of riff that the boys are laying down
Don't even listen to the notes and rhythms
It's the kind of thing we do just to mess you up

Judge me by my hairdo
or don't judge me at all
Judge me by my hairdo
'cause I'm an individual

Pay no heed to the brand I'm drinkin'
or the clothes I'm wearing (what was I thinkin'?)
You gotta look beyond the superficial
if you wanna know me for who I truly am

Jet Black, Slicked Back
Come on check out my attitude
Dreadlock, Mohawk
Get a load of my style
Shaved Head, Dyed Red
Whaddya think of my fashion statement?
Blow Dried, Deep Fried
Come on baby, go 'head and check me out

Never mind about my social station
or if I'm down with the coronation (no!)
Don't even ask about my religion
'cause I know how to look like I'm deep in thought...

 

[lasagne]

Please tell me whether or not it causes uncontrollable foot stomping to the point of hip displaysia.

Yes. It does.

Nice work.

 

[Todzilla]

Thanks wavy pasta,

Any areas ripe for improvement?

I keep hearing some slight phasing in snare drum....

 

[ido1957]

Good one Todzilla - funky and addictive.... Vocals are outstanding.....
The mix is superb. Playing excellent... Harp break is perfect.....
The only thing that I didn't care for was the tink tink sound on the end of the keyboard/organ hits. Just a tone thing....

 

[Todzilla]

Good one Todzilla - funky and addictive.... Vocals are outstanding.....
The mix is superb. Playing excellent... Harp break is perfect.....
The only thing that I didn't care for was the tink tink sound on the end of the keyboard/organ hits. Just a tone thing....

THe "tink" sound is probably the percussion on the organ patch I'm using. It sounded great on its own, but perhaps in context it's a bit confusing.

Thanks for listening and commenting!