Jailhouse Hop - Original Cover? Listen Please

[ziplock43]

Hey guys. This is an original riff I came up with and put it with a song I'm sure you're familiar with. I recorded this with 2 AKG Dynamic Mics (crappy!), a Marshall G10 MK II (the small one w/ 3 nobs). I couldn't get the tone right on the rhythm guitar that's panned to the left, don't know why.

Anyways tell me what you think. This is an old recording I found, and didn't spend much time on it unfortunately. What jumps out to you guys as "Needs Major Improvement" ?

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5541971&q=hi

 

[toad_uk]

Hi ziplock. I liked the music, reminds me of cream or budgie. Probably the wrong person to judge because I love the vintage sounds which I think you've captured. The rap was a bit of surprise but seemed to work though it seemed a bit too busy at times, but overall I liked it. Sorry not much help cos I like the music they way it is.