I've Made It Through the Storm"

[Irwin abrigo]

My original Instrumental song entitled: "I've Made It Through the Storm" wish someone tell me what they think about my sound over all.

I've Made It Through The Storm by irwin abrigo | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[slimcharles42]

Hey, thanks for sharing this. To me this sounds very MIDI-heavy, but might be the effect you're going for. The mix itself sounds fine without being particularly 'spectacular'. The bassline is school.

The song itself is quite stop-start in odd places (again, you might have been going for this effect). I think you may want to re-think the piano line and the synth line, as they sound like they're not 'anchored' to a specific melody, and sound quite unnatural in places. The song also starts and stops quite abruptly, so you may want to think about the dynamics of how the instruments drop in and out.

Good luck!

 

[spantini]

Alright, Irwin! This one is a bit more musical, though it has it's rough spots - particularly where the drums drop out around the 1:10 mark.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Hi slimcharles42 and spantini, I read your feedback and I am taking it serious also I will be working on my composing skills to bring it up to standard. Thank you very much for listening to my song.

Irwin