It's Time For War (Sneek Preview)

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Sneek Preview Of my new hit It's Time 4 War

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/balki_music.htm


The Beat & The story I Tell Is Oh! So perfect 4 tha beat (just listen) tO THE WORD's.

This Is not yet finished just thought I'd let you cat's get a glimpse of What I've been doing & working hard on. Feedbk will alway's be appreciated. 1 verse 2:07 tops with a ill chrous by. me
 
It's time for War


Distorted and clipping. Beat sounds lo-fi. I stopped listening to your lyrics after a couple of ni**ers and a motherf**ker, but your delivery is out of time. It may be deliberate, but the rythmic delivery of your vocal sounds incidental to the beat - as a drummer and lyricist it's problematic to my ears. It might be what you're aiming for, so what do I know?

-Casey
 
sorry i don't usually ever get that graphic into my ryhmes but I felt like going that direction this time probably my last
 
I am definitely not one to comment on the quality of rap music in general... :p ...but I can say this much. The music sounds extremely lo-fi, and from what I hear, extremely produced and polished sounds are what hip-hop and rap is all about (musically speaking). I hear alot of clipping and distortion as well.....also, I could did not make it past about the 27th "yeah" near the beginning....so I'm not criticizing your actual lyrical content or delivery. On those matters I am completely incapable of giving you any feedback.
 
I must add....I did not intend for my previous post to come off as a smart remark. I am just an extremely "unhip" metalhead who does not understand rap music..... However I was trying to be constructive about the music side of things.
 
Ouch.... Hmmmm.... I hate to post a strictly negative review, so let me think of something positive to say............ Oh well, maybe something will come to me later....

I didn't like the lyrics (including the yeah yeah 1000x part), the recording was distorted, the lyrics were out of time, and the arrangement was deficient...

The samples sounded "cheesy". Overall mix was muffled.

Other than that, it was "a hit" as you say...
Jest my opinion, I'm sure others might agree.
 
Don't be discouraged - we're just fuckin' around. Post it up again and don't mix it down so hot! Vocal a little lower in the mix! Bring it back.

Que-Si
 
Yay another " rapper ". I listened for about 20 "yeah's" and i had to stop.

rap is pathetic in my opinion, If i have to hear another "Chains spinnaz bitches" imma puke, MTV made you this way man, its MTV's fault, go listen to robert johnson, and L armstrong. thats where the talent is at.

i swear to god if i ever rise to power, the first thing i will do is ban rap, and burn all rap, pop, hiphop labels.
 
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