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Balladeer
"There is a natural prosody that English tends to follow, and without it we'd all sort of sound like the dwarf and Laura Palmer in the red room on Twin Peaks."
Wow, Twin Peaks, excellent film, and what a scene you selected there to make your point - must dust off the video soon and watch that again.
Its strange sometimes you see aspiring song writers posting lyrics on groups like this that may rhyme, but just don't 'sound right' - I think when writing if the words put together sound like they could be used in general conversation (and we're not talking two college professors discussing nuclear physics, just ordinary people) then you're on the right lines.
It doesn't really matter what you're saying in the song its the way you say it. The song may not even have a meaning as long as each of the words and phrases sounds right. Where the skill comes in is knowing what sounds right - some people seem to do it instinctively, others struggle and just don't get it - coming up with convoluted non-conversational lines in order to get a rhyme at the end!
Words written by Robbie Williams are a good example - each line sounds OK - but the lines don't add up to a coherant meaning. Does it matter - no they're still hits (at least here in the UK).
Wow, Twin Peaks, excellent film, and what a scene you selected there to make your point - must dust off the video soon and watch that again.
Its strange sometimes you see aspiring song writers posting lyrics on groups like this that may rhyme, but just don't 'sound right' - I think when writing if the words put together sound like they could be used in general conversation (and we're not talking two college professors discussing nuclear physics, just ordinary people) then you're on the right lines.
It doesn't really matter what you're saying in the song its the way you say it. The song may not even have a meaning as long as each of the words and phrases sounds right. Where the skill comes in is knowing what sounds right - some people seem to do it instinctively, others struggle and just don't get it - coming up with convoluted non-conversational lines in order to get a rhyme at the end!
Words written by Robbie Williams are a good example - each line sounds OK - but the lines don't add up to a coherant meaning. Does it matter - no they're still hits (at least here in the UK).