Invisible Father

[VSpaceBoy]

This is what happens when some who listens to techno (me) is asked to make a rap song for someone else's lyrics(chad).

Invisible Father

Lemme know if this is a train wreck or not.
Thanks for listening!

 

[true-eurt]

I liked it!! Cool! I especially liked the Bass part at around 2:10.

No train wreck here!!

 

[VSpaceBoy]

Thanks for the ear!

 

[Dogman]

This is what happens when some who listens to techno (me) is asked to make a rap song for someone else's lyrics(chad).

Invisible Father

Lemme know if this is a train wreck or not.
Thanks for listening!

I'd say train wreck, but in a good way. Nice sounds. Very good bass sounds. Very loud, and I know this is waht they want. Vocals are clear. I'd say good job. And if train wreck is bad, no. Put together well. Nice job, SpaceBoy.
Ed

 

[mr. produca]

the piano sounds nice, i like the lyrics

 

[RAMI]

Nice arrangement. Cool groove. Nothing wrong with this at all. It's as good as any rap out there, and very thoughtful lyrics. Nice vocal effects. Has a similar feel to "Don't push me 'cause I'm close to the egde..." (The Jungle???). Also has a Dogg Pound/ Dr. Dre thing going on in the instrumentaion. Good stuff.

 

[Decipha]

its a good mix the production is ok the vocals are good and he has a good tone
just a shiity voice not meant for rapping IMO

vocalists needs a little practice but overall nice track 2/5


...just my 2 pennies

 

[VSpaceBoy]

Great feedback guys (n gals). Thanks for listening!