dob...
When the guitars come in, there's about 1/2 second of fuzz to trim (you've probably heard that).
Pretty good take-off on 12-bar. The "chorus" may benefit from a different bass drum & tom-tom sound... don't know why but they sound out of place there, esp. after the verse.
Good playing. Nice wide panning & use of compression on the "strings" in the choruses.
Mouth horns... can't seem to carry that whole instrumental break. Just a preference.
Shaker (to me) as it's used here indicates that the song will open up at some point. When it's used throughout, IMO it doesn't work.
Good effort here, do-bo.
Nice job. Since you seem to have "FIDEL" on the brain even with infidelity, here ya go. W/Cohiba cigar. Enjoy.
Chad