indifferent metal, lead up for grabs!

[Jouni]

HA!!!

I made it, hit you with another piece of shit before you flooded the previous off the page, uncommented even by the worst critics.

Somehow this Metaltune turned totally indefferent to me, which I realised halfway the mixing... Odd, I usually like my songs!
But this, useless melodic Ozzy-ish POP!!!!
Heavy, though...

Couldn't get myself to play a lead good enough to salvage the song...
So, if there's anyone that thinks he/she can, you're welcome to try!!!

...9 hours, tracking mixing etc...

 

[Pinky]

Production is there, although I'd make some changes to the mix. The rhythm and bass guitars sound good but they're a little buried. Drums work well. Not sure if you do much compression on the tracks, but I think they could use a little, which should help bring them up more in the mix.

Tried a lead over it and came up with a few decent parts, but the progression seems less than inspiring. Could use more changes, and maybe trim the end down a bit?

Maybe you were right to put this away, maybe come back and revisit it later?

 

[Dogman]

Nice guitar tone...fits well. I kept waiting for Ozzy's voice...

I like teh tune...hopefully someone can do some good lead for it.

 

[Jouni]

Thanks for the answers!!!

Yeah, unless someone gets an interesting melody/solo in it, in which case I'll put it up, I'll probably dismantle it, keep the B-part in mind and dismiss the rest.

I like the guitartone too, a Gibson LP baritone. It's a monster!..
Unlike to me the bass is finger-played, only way I could get a decent "clank" out of the humbuckers.


.....allready working on another, a bit faster tune...