Im Sprung --- Critique The Mix, The Flow

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I JUST DID THIS JOINT THIS MORNING -- AFTER SEEIN THE VIDEO -- ITS A SUBMISSION FOR A MIXTAPE DJ AROUND MY WAY -- FEEDBACK PLEASE

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THE SONG IS CALLED "IM SPRUNG_REMIX" SHOULD BE FIRST ON THE PAGE
 
Send me the 3rd verse for role model acapella style....I'm diggin' that one more than the first, but I have the first too.

Listening to the sprung remix
 
feelin this the bass is nice this is all just my opinion i would like to have seen the claps spread out a little widder maybe even layered it all seems center mixed . a track like this needs to hit you from all angles extreme left to right. i would pan the cher type voice slightly to the left or right cuz when it comes in it feels like it pulls your attention to it kinda slaping you in the face in a good way or even put it on a slow pan. But a once again just all my opinion i could be dead wrong . sounds good tho
 
Yo Beat, you never heard that song? It's a mainstream song....Gully just added the verses to it.
 
I hate this song anything you do to it would be an improvement.

Personally I'd rather hear you rap the whole song than listen to that autotuned shit.
 
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Nobody can replace Roger and Zapp on tha vocoder sound...nobody.


not even my mentor King Arthur although he comes really close
 
I thought it was cool!
As far as just spittin on something, that'll work. I think you did the original piece Justice!
 
thanks for all the feedback --
^5 to FIEVA for recognizin the "original song" lol

like i siad, im tryin to get a couple of mixtape djs to rep it - as a good alternative to the original --
a friend of mine said that his coworkers have started singin the damm song everynight at work -- lol

so im hopin i can catch them in the groove with my version!!!
 
Auto-tune anyone?

Man, on the original song they used way to much Auto-Tune to get that electronic voice. But, I'm just saying... :rolleyes:

I like ya verses... Before you put it out make sure to mix the vocals to fit in the mix a little better. Make it flow nice from the chours to your verse (mix wise) and I think you got it... :cool:


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