im an amateur

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hi guys im 7 years amateur. this is my first year of recording music of my own with recording studio software. i wana become a recording artist. im just starting. i attached my first arranged song. this is simple and composes a rythm and harmony only, no melody. tell me about it. if its sucks, just tell me so that i know. and please give me some comments or any that are bad or good in my music. HOW WAS IT? :) do i need to go to school?

to hear my song please follow this:
1. got to http://digitalsoundplanet.com/VirtualStudios/Listen/listen.phtml
2.at the left side you can see the genre box, you must choose the acoustic genre.
3.at the right side, type "141" at the textbox and click go.
4.then you can see at the author named "jerberson" with song title "untitled". click the "full" to download the or hear my song thnx

please have time to listen my song. your comments will make me better thnx :)
 
This should go in the mix clinic or songwriting forum.

The beginning is looping waay too many times.
The change is too little too late.

Try to make your music evolve and flow not barely change and repeat. The Sounds used are kinda grating after a while, good drum sounds though.

It's just boring man. There's no lyrics or real content to grab a guy.

....not this part again. I don't want to see files and loops when I hear a song. I want some magic.

School has nothing to do with it..keep practicing. The key is: will you play this in a CD changer with your favorite music and get off on it just the same or does it bring the mood down?
 
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im planning to put a lyrin on it, thats why in was loop waay to long. anyway my point is not how do i play chords, but the way i mix and the way i make sounds good. :) thnx jake thats a lot of help. ok loops are ridiculous , majic is the best
 
In that case your sounds are fine and some of the mixing is nice work.
 
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