listened to the first one. I don't know what it is, the whole mix sounds like it's got lot's of room sound. Probably just lacking some highs. The vox sound good, bring them up more!
But, all the vox have a weird effect to it, and it's keeping them sounding pro...maybe just the mic, I dunno.
nonetheless, the arrangement and performance are great, really dig how you pan things, too. Some nice taste in your panning.
good job
Al