Idea for a song. Feedback please!!!

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Any thoughts???? (I recorded a small portion of the song as an example there's more of it!!!)

Cheers
Rich
 
tell you what, with a bit of cleaning up, this could seriously be a cracking song. just work on the verse's - it'll take a bit of work to get the word-pause-word-pause etc parts to work properly, but with the guitar riffing as it is, it builds up suspension nicely. theres a hint of 'aint talking about love' with a guitar playing arpeggio's. i reckon you should try bringing these out more.
playing as i listen, i like the bit that says 'your heart does me something...' when the guitar just cuts out and restarts. thats cool.

be interested to hear that tune when its done with the drums there andy everything
 
Cheers, yet timing issues but as its a rough it's not that important, dragged it out to practise some compression! I can;t wait to put a nice fat solo in it!!!
 
cant really say much at this point other than you have a good voice. the guitar parts are so off time its almost annoying. if you formed the song the right way it could be pretty good. just needs a lot of work, but you probably knew that already. whatever.
 
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