I know I post alot in the Clinic but...

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I cant believe this tune.. If ever there were a song I would want people to hear it would be this.

This was the first song I ever wrote on an acoustic guitar a few years ago.. I was 16. Ive been out of work all week and playing with my new pod and yamaha keyboard I transposed it.

Im afraid to write words because I dont want to destroy the song.. I only have 3 good songs (in my opinon) and I wont sing over any of them.

Im my cheap (SP-5B) monitors this sounds amazing.. Please let me know what I can do to get this the best sounding It could possibly be...

Thanks for all your time.



If you want to hear the original acoustic version its
 
I think this is a very cool emotionaly packed groove. I wouldnt sing over it either. I would maybe add another instrument voice doing something melodic though. Very nice man.
 
what would you suggest for an istrument?
I was thinking of adding an acoustic guitar to try for that Radiohead Street Spirit sound but I'm still waiting for PreSonus to send my pre-amp back.. I dont want to record the acoustic through my behringer mixer pres.

What could I add?
 
Hey Demensia,
..very nice stuff man. This is screaming for vocs, imo..... Lotsa room for melody in there. I caught a few brain darts at the end on the lead guitar. Very cool tune Dem:)

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I agree with G-man. The music sounds great. But without vocals it's just kind of the same few sections repeated. Needs a melody line and vocals.

Brain darts (as G-man said) at about 1:52. The whole tone on the lead guit is a little abrasive. Nicely played though.

Good job... Trip
 
"Im my cheap (SP-5B) monitors"

Hey come on, take it easy on the monitors.

Just had to say that, I'll try to take a listen tonite or tomorrow.
 
demensia said:
Damnit, I was all excited about that tone.
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Oh don't listen to what some chuckle-head on the homerec board said. :D. Seriously, I'd suspect that with a well placed EQ cut somewhere in the mids, it'd be ok.
 
Hey G-man just slammed me. You've hurt my feelings. :D:D:D

I need a hug.
 
Some of the highs in the solo need to go. Argh, my ears hurt! Equalise it, please! :)

Not sure about the kick, but the rest sounds good and warm. About the bridges/verses: I like the first version better (with the acoustic guitars). It's the synths that bother me a litlle.

Some rock vocal would be nice (that guy from Germany would be cool, I forgot his name but he makes really good FNM-esque music)....
 
:D :D :D ...trip, I meant i agree with the eq comment ....I wouldnt throw things at you man.....:)
 
I'm laughing. :D


Nice piece of music man........I think I agree with the EQ comments although I didn't find it as harsh as some others did.
 
Yeah, after waiting a few days and listening to it back it doesnt sound so good to me after all.

Fuck.
 
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